That was pretty good
Hey nice animation mate, the framerate was so verry smooth, graphics were a bit off but you left the audience in suspence.
Alright Go Marcus
Okay By the looks of this and All I say this is pretty good, coz it is reasonably long and you did put your effort into this So its really good, although I just dont like the song, its just me that hates the song coz its loud and annoying and my friend always puts that song into his flash animations, and yknow just gets annoying to me, but the rest was good, I was thinking Maybe Put like a hero to fight all of those mean soliders (for instance draw a neo stick) neo stick would problably look like a stick with one of those long jackets and you can draw him dodging bullets and all.
I liked that
That was pretty good but nekt time when your doing saber fights use an actual stick and then when your making your sabers on the flash program do the saber frame by frame and youll get alot better marks and also when theres a frame that has the stick look like a triangle sort of shape trace over the whole triangle and it'll look better.
And when doing your voices leave them out and just move your lips and then when its on your computer record your voices in sequence with the lines and youll be heard much clearer.
Other than that you guys are great.
I see alot of potentiel in your movies and I reakon you might be a professional one day, Im actully making a real time movie like yours myself, perhaps you could give me a few tips on how to make the lightsabers, if not thats ok.
Gook luck on your next movie.
Just so you know, i am a proffesional! I'm getting paid for my new game! Thanks for the review. To make lightsabers, make a stick shape (not using lines) then go Modify -> Shape -> Soften fill edges. Put 15 in both the boxes then click ok. then just colour in the middle white. :D
And mine was frigin blammed
I cant bellive this my sticks actully moved their limbs and all and ur movie stayes on wat type of world is this the world where all the dumbest most idiotic flash animations stay on while most other peoples first flashes that the person put alot of hard work into are blammed your movie was the worsed ever I cant even bellive that your accound has not been deleted yet for you saying vote 5 you are a discrace.
body's need a little inproving
Pretty good trailer all you need is to inprove the looks on the characters body but then again it was smashing great!
I wish I could animate like that already.
Hey its ok
Somtimes people who have never used flash befor expects everybody elses work to be perfect but I understand how hard flash is to use all i didint like was the music next time put on somthing a little more appropriate and put a story in or a plot in the movie and make some sound effects and speeches, overall the animating was fantastic. Good Work
ps put on appropriate background music.
I must say that was good espesially for a first flash, mine was blammed you just keep going dude your cool.
Just add more colour okay.
Thats not a Samurai
I study and I study good that was no where near a samurai outfit or a Samurai sword I hate to say.
When I first watched Samurai Jack I started to have a liking for Samurais so I went to study them Quite Interesting they were.
And now I know what they look like and all.
So study first.
Or you'll get bad markings
Ohh I was getting used to the pretty girl
THat old lady scared the hell out of me for god sakes I was expecting it to be a story of some sort of sailor scout.
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